Standing behind the chain link fence, behind the lights, behind the electricity of the crowd, behind all of it. I wasn't apart of it. I was watching with envy as my sister bounced onto the field in the familiar hornette run. i was entranced by the way they performed, the crowd eyeing their every move. Right then, that exact moment, I knew what I wanted.
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I really liked it, super descriptive (however you spell that)
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